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我目前的工作是测量.偶尔喜欢煮菜给女友吃.我的家庭共有 5个人.父亲是当商人.母亲当裁缝师.哥哥当监造.姐姐当老师.在这个家庭 每星期日都会有一个家庭聚会.就是晚上大家一起在家聚餐吃饭. 所以大家的感情都很好 工作….2.我目前在一家测量公司上班.我做测量这个行业已经有2年多了 .当兵之前是当厨师约半年.当兵期间也煮了一年.退伍后也从事 厨房半年.但我最大的兴趣还是测量.因为非常有趣生动.我的经验 有做过高铁.捷运.海上测量.还有在台中港做水准测量.我们测量队成员 总共有十三个人.分2组.一组是中钢组.一组是捷运.还有2位划图人员 跟一位队长跟老板.所以工作非常的快乐 期望…在正修科技大学这四年的期间好好把学业充实好.并且把自己的 实力提升.目标测量.品管.劳安.autocad.证照.一并拿起来.在来面对最困难 的土木技师.并且好好养一个家生个小宝宝.工作稳定是必然的.面对任何 事都不能半途而废.有了资金以后就要开一间火锅店当做自己的兴趣下 去经营.  x0
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70040128
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Family …my son calls the XXX come from that Kaohsiung was born in XXXX-XX-XX me to go an alacrity
My current work is a diagraph.Occasionally like to cook vegetables to eat for girlfriend.My family has totally 5 persons.The father is businessman.The mother is tailor.The elder brother is Jian to build.The elder sister is a teacher.At this family Will there is a family party every Sundays.Is everyone in the evening together the dinner party has a meal at home. So everyone's affection is all very good. Work ….2.I go to work at a diagraph company currently.I do to have already measured this industry for more than 2 years .Before serving as soldier is be a cook to invite half year.Served as soldier a period to also cook for a year.Also work on after retiring from the army Half year of the kitchen.But my biggest interest still measure.Because very interesting vivid.My experience Did a high speed railway.Mass transit.The sea measures.The harbor that still has in Taichung does the level diagraph.We measure a team member There are 13 persons altogether.Divide into 2.The a set of is to win a steel set.The a set of is a mass transit.Still there are 2s to mark diagram a personnel Follow a captain and owner.So the work is very happy Expect …at period been fixing science and technology university for this four years good like like studies enrichment.And chase own of The strength promotes.The target measures.Quality control.Lao Anne.autocad.License.Pick up along together.At to face the most difficult Of civil engineer.And like like to keep a house to get a darling child.Working the stability is inevitable.Face any The matter can't do things by halves.Had a funds hereafter will open a chafing dish store to be considered as under own interest Conduct. 请问会英文比较强的可以来帮忙吗?因为有人帮我翻的但是我觉得翻的意思有点问题请问有高手可以帮忙解吗?先谢谢搂 x0
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浩瀚的宇宙
2007-05-06 17:07 |
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傻眼 大大您结婚啰
my son calls............ 不是我的名字 怎么变成 我儿子的名字 虽然我英文没很好 但是整个翻译起来 有些应该是用 线上翻译机吧! 我想帮您 可是我自已英文又不好 您去知识+ 里面有很多高手 最好 把你自已翻译的 放上去 这样 大家才会觉得 您有用心 不然有些大大会不理你的 x0
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2007-05-06 22:11 |
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这是我求雅虎知识用下来的!有人帮我翻的!但是句子确实很怪!虽然英文我不太懂!但我还是有慢慢去查去观看!现在只缺东风而已!那个东西就是高手来帮忙!!谢谢大家来帮忙回覆!谢谢
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Davis
2007-05-08 22:26 |
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这个是用翻译软体翻的英文，实在是"残不忍赌"。没必要最好不要用，否则会有不良的后果。
最好先将中文改一下，不要将一些"乌黑某"搞进来。如果这是一篇自传，最基本的先分段。 先尝试自我写一下，然后po上来，自然有人就会帮你稍略"巡试" 一下。 最近大家皆不愿"鸡婆"了，皆因打火兄弟来无影，去无踪，又非常ungrateful!!  x0
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浩瀚的宇宙
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下面是引用Davis于2007-05-08 22:26发表的 : ........不是不愿意鸡婆 而是 小的真的英文没很好 最近 我才在尝试写作 写的真是零零落落 还有 您的工作 里面的一些专有名词 职业头衔 我根本不知道 该怎么翻译  x0
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Family ... The names I called XXX from Kaohsiung XXXX-XX-XX I was born in the lively trip of my current work is measured volume. occasionally like to cook for my girlfriend eat. My family is a total of five individuals. When the father is businessman. When the mother tailor. When my brother supervision. sister as a teacher. In this family every Sunday will be a family gathering. Everyone is at home with dinner eat. So our feelings are good jobs ... . 2. I am currently in a measurement work. I do measurements in the industry have two more years. When a soldier before cooks About half a year. cook as soldiers during the year. Legionnaires after six months in the kitchen. However, my greatest interest is measured. Non - often lively and interesting manner. My experience has been the high-speed railway. MRT. surface. Taichung Harbor have done in the standard of measurement. We measurement Team members of a total of 13 individuals. divided into 2 groups. is a group of steel group. MRT is a group. there are two plans is a team with staff long with the boss. So very happy expect ... Amendment of the University of Science and Technology is the four years of this period to put good academic enrichment. and the strength of their upgrade. objective measurement. quality control . Lao An. autocad. license. take up together. in the most difficult to face civil technician. and a good support home birth to small babies. Working stability is inevitable. face anything can valueless. With funds is about a future Hot Pot Restaurant between them as their interest to operate under.
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2007-05-19 01:40 |
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occasionally like to cook for my girlfriend eat
经常要把女朋友"煮"来吃?? ? oh!!That's great.  x0
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2007-05-22 23:50 |
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My name is xxx. I was born in Kaohsiung Country in 1981. My individuality is active and extroverted. I am an architectural interior surveyor. I always like to cook some delicious foods with my family and girlfriend in my free time. There are five people in my family. My father is a businessman. He is conscientious about his job in one sense, and I was affected by my father. My mother is a dressmaker. She is good at making any kinds of good dresses. I have an older brother, who is a tindal. My older sister is a teacher, who works in a cram school. We always have a family reunion and eat at home every Sunday. I am very fortunate to have grown up in a harmonious family.
I used to be a chef for half a year before I joined the army. During the soldiering, I did some cook service for the other soldiers for almost one year. When I demobilized, I was still being a chef for half a year. However, it is not my favorite job. I found my interesting is architectural interior survey engineering. It is more divertive than cooking. I have been working in an architectural interior design company for two years. That̉̉ s why I am attractive by architectural interior survey engineering at present. As an architectural interior surveyor, I have a lot of practical survey experiences. For instance, some survey assignments in High- speed railway, Rapid transit and at sea survey. I used to do a level survey in Taichung Harbor. There were thirteen clansmen in our survey team. We separated it into two groups. One was Chinese Steel team, and the other one was Rapid transit team. There was also a headman who would boss our team about and two cartographers who drew some charts for us. This was a special and unforgettable experience for me. My formal major is Architectural at Cheng Shiu University now. During the four years, I will focus on academically study. It is now my aim to advance my professional knowledge in quality control, excel and autocad. I also plan to get the architectural interior survey license as soon as possible. It must be an arduous task for me but I will affront it. I think to be an architectural interior survey engineer will not be a dream for me. After graduated, I plan to get a stable architectural interior survey job. I will get married with my girlfriend. We plan to have a baby. It is important for me to get enough money to keep my family. If I get plenty bankroll I will invest a chafing dish restaurant. Because having a chafing dish restaurant is my second dream. I'm confident about being successful in the future. I will face those challenges and won't abandon anything bad in my life. 谢谢大家的用心喔!经过我的努力与奋斗我终于写好了!谢谢大家喔!  x0
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大部份写的不错，除了少许地方可以修改一下，会更好。
I always like to cook some delicious foods with my family and girlfriend in my free time →→ I always like to cook some delicious food for my family and girlfriend in my spare time.(这句中文之意就是闲暇之余，我为家人与女友整上一桌让大家大块朵颐一番。而上一句是有空 之时，与大家整上一桌，共享盛宴，与你的原文不同) He is conscientious about his job in one sense →→中文：在某种意义上而言，他工作负责尽职。易言之，有时尽责，有时可能??  改为→→He is conscientious about his work devotedly(或是single-mindedly) 或是→→He is conscientious about his work with all his might.(倾全力努力工作) and at sea survey →→and at-sea survey 或是 and sea survey I used to do level survey(水准测量) →→leveling survey There were thirteen clansmen in our survey team →→There were 13 associates (members)in our survey team . clansmen是表示家庭成员或是家族成员，如按上面的写法就表示这13人皆有亲戚关系。 This was a special and unforgettable experience for me →→This is a special and unforgettable experience for me.现在式比较符合情境 It is now my aim to advance my professional knowledge in quality control, excel and autocad →→It is now my aim to advance my professional skills in quality control, labour security, autocad training, and working licence. I think to be an architectural interior survey engineer will not be a dream for me →→I don't think it will be a dream (for me) to be an architectural interior survey engineer. If I get plenty bankroll I →→If I got plenty of bankroll, I would．．． Because having a chafing dish restaurant is my second dream →→To have(run) a chafing dish restaurant is my second dream.表示未来的愿望，不能用动名词来 当主词。 I'm confident about being successful in the future →→I'm confident in my future life.或是 →→I'm confident of doing well in the future. won't abandon anything bad in my life →→中文之意：不会放弃我生命中任何的坏事 →→won't abandon my sweet dream in my life.  x0
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